Talon One
Flight One
"Where is he?" I jerked my head around and searched around me, "Talon One, lost contact, request picture." Just then, a flash of metal shot straight up in front of me, Ah, there you are, I yanked back on the stick and went into a sharp climb. "Talon One, ignore last transmission, I've got him," I pressed my throttle into afterburner and accelerated. Suddenly, he flipped over backwards and fell past me, "Damn!" I cried. Pulling back, I watched as he turned over and started to recover control, not this time; I pulled back hard and leveled my sights on him, then I squeezed the trigger to unleash a rain of bullets. The tor
Thats insane! I pounded my fist on Officer Cornwalls table, acquiring the attention of everyone in the rec-room, theres no way! The F-22 cant take that pressure, shell break up and theres no ejecting from that altitude.
Actually, said a short man, stepping forward, the F-22 Raptor will take the stress of a full stall at that altitude about for approximately one minute, providing the craft isnt damaged to begin with.
And who are you, I asked.
Steve Mikes, Lockheed Martin. He outstretched his hand, but I just stared at it,
Sir, captain Lambke reporting as ordered, I stood at attention before my commanding officer, holding a salute. There were three other airmen in that office: Ted Jango Husman, Aaron Ice Burg, Jack Sparrow Lines, and Sarah Cobra Sawyer who was wearing a flight suit like me, telling me I wasnt the only one called back from the air.
At ease, said the officer, standing up behind his desk. Gentlemen, and lady, he looked Cobra, Im going to cut right to the chase, you are the best pilots this base has to offer. The white house has info
I woke up with a jolt, ow. I rubbed my head where it hit the bed above me. My ears were ringing, no, they were whining, wait, thats not my ears. A siren? Now I was fully awake, I jumped out of bed and quickly got to the door. I grabbed the first person I saw, whats happening?
Get to your plane, he said, details will be relayed to your kneeboard. I thanked him and ran down the hall. I was still wearing my g-suit from yesterday and all I needed to get was my flight gear. I entered the ready room, grabbed my stuff, and was still sliding my pistol into my pocket when I ran out the door
Talon One
Flight One
"Where is he?" I jerked my head around and searched around me, "Talon One, lost contact, request picture." Just then, a flash of metal shot straight up in front of me, Ah, there you are, I yanked back on the stick and went into a sharp climb. "Talon One, ignore last transmission, I've got him," I pressed my throttle into afterburner and accelerated. Suddenly, he flipped over backwards and fell past me, "Damn!" I cried. Pulling back, I watched as he turned over and started to recover control, not this time; I pulled back hard and leveled my sights on him, then I squeezed the trigger to unleash a rain of bullets. The tor
Don't ever want it to leave me.
Somebody please take it away.
No I desire it too greatly.
It will not leave, it will stay.
You mess with my emotions.
I will mess with yours.
It made such a commotion.
You're lucky it didn't start a war.
My mind has divided into two.
One can love and the other can hate.
I hold my breath until I become blue.
You will never find out your fate.
I need and crave for it.
I want some more.
My heart was ripped.
And then quickly the blood poured.
Every hour I heal.
Becoming stronger once again.
All that was fake is now real.
My life has moved on finally, Amen.
Current Residence: Prosper, TX Favourite genre of music: Rock Operating System: Windows XP MP3 player of choice: Ipod Favourite cartoon character: Misty
Hi, yes, remember me? Good. Wow, I almost forgot I had this DeviArt.
Hm...
Anyway, I've been busy with Talon One, I've written up to twelve chapters and looking back it turns out I hate most of them. So right now my four projects are as follows:
1. I'm currently writing chapter 12 in a brand-kinda-new green spiral notebook.
2. I'm completely rewriting chapter 8 because I found it atrocious.
3. Typing chapter 5-6 into my computer.
4. Editing already typed chapters.
If you happen to be observant you should have noticed that I deleted and reloaded Chapter One. I will be doing this with ALL the chapters that are posted eventually so don't
I am going to do a complete revision of Talon One. If you would like to appear in the story as a character please comment. I need at least four boys and three girls. If you would like a particular role please leave a comment. Roles include: a wife, a baby girl, at least three pilots (including a girl), commanding officers, and a repesentive from Lockheed Martin. http://aden6666.deviantart.com/